Wednesday, March 9, 2011

They'll never mix....Nothing will ever fix

Somethings in life never change.  If a thousand yrs goes by...Rich will be Rich..snub will be snub...She was 15 when she went to this party..and the most amazing looking guy asked her to dance with him...the moment was so magical...chemistry was there...in a young girls mind..never kissed before...that was the magical  moment to stay with  her in her mind for ever...she Fell so madly in love with him..They met for the next few months...and every time her love for him blossomed more...but .he.was from this well to do family...the type that only go for the very best....In his mind she was not from the same class..so he fell in love with some other woman..much to fit his family traditions...and  his Glory...The girl grew up....took 20 years to forget the love she felt at that young age..met another guy from same category...he loved her...but didn't know she wasn't from the same class...She was so afraid to reveal the truth...cause she knew his love for her would end just as it did with the other one..so she decided to end it all...leaving all feelings behined...now he'll never know the real reason...So, if a thousand years go by and a thousand words are said in a thousand different ways....some things will never change...Rich will be  Rich...poor will be poor...they'll never mix....nothing will ever fix......

1 comment:

  1. Carmen,

    There is so much... So much more in this story... And I would love to read more...

    A good start!
    Always give something of yourself in your art and your fans will appreciate you more.

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